justsomerandomdude's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smuggler's Stream]

I think you have some inverted faces, if that's possible in sketchup, as some faces do not accept lighting but appear black

Labyrinthus responds:

Yeah the default rendering in Sketchup is terrible. There some 3rd party ones I'm gonna start using soon so that should help out quite a lot

[Stefie Jobs]

I can definatly see what her selling strategy is

yanco responds:

damn, and here I thougth it was god damn subtle!

[a elephant by philipv11]

Illustrator is a vector based program so why do you use it as photoshop?

philipv11 responds:

i dont use it as photoshop?????

[Fool]

minimalistic but beautiful landscape awesome dragon
but the thing that I'm most impressed with is the veigns you can see through the membrane of the dragonwing
just awesome

1600 responds:

thanks! the veins are my favorite part too

[Barber Bot]

I think I saw this on the wall in a classroom of DAE

very nice

azelinus responds:

thanks! You saw correctly btw, it's one of my few works which they displayed.

[Just a Walk in the Forest]

I wish I could pull of something like that in 8 hours
Very nice

marck-musician responds:

Thanks a lot! :)

[Sexy engeneer.]

Don't be sorry , act like you ment it to be that way
Act like your in control, you want respect , you DEMAND respect!
You look haters in the eyes and have a staredown then you demand them to do it better , you demand them to criticise your work , tear it down to the last bit or vector or fabric of whatever material you used
And while doing that, THOU SHALT NOT SHED A SINGLE TEAR for you are a man, a man who wants to be respected, one who shall gain respect!
And when that critic criticised your work you will consider it and look at it from a distance and take into account their criticism and fix what you agree is wrong and if they are saying bullshit like well I just don't rlly like it DEMAND AN IN DEPTH ANALYSIS ON WHY THEY DON'T LIKE IT
VALID REASONS AND ARGUMENTS TO BUILD A STRONGER FOUNDATION UPON

And now I hope you know why not to be sorry about something you made, even when you see error and had something else in mind. The random viewer does not know shit about that and just sees what presented

Now on to the criticism part
I have worked in Illustrator and I am also aware it can be a bitch , not a bitch like flash though. Flash looks you in the eyes when you're working on a project and forgot to save and is then like FUCK YOU I'm done!
And it just shuts off, laughing as you cry thinking in hindsight why you didn't finish. But I digress

Personally I like your previous work better , the samurai
And here it comes , I TELL YOU WHY isn't that just dandy (=other word for wonderfull just felt like using it here)
Illustrator is a vector based program used for lines , big lines , zoom in scale it out , the fucker doesn't get pixels , anyway...
Because it's vector based, I personally like vector based drawings to be single lines , not overlapping like in this one (not saying I don't like what I see here and don't think that theres no hope , far from)
But maybe I'm wrong , maybe it adds a bit of motion , a bit of life to a colorless 2d line image
She still pops out of the background is what I'm trying to say
Actually I don't have much to criticise , there is no colour , so can't complain about that
I already said what I thought about the lines
And well the girl figure stands out from the rest which she has to since she is I guess the subject

Anyway, I would want to see more work, illustrator , photoshop I don't care , I would like to see something in color though because this is actually an unfinished sketch

And maybe if you send me a message back sometime when you have enough art , and I like most of it I might scout you , I see potention compared to others I see on the unscouted section

And congratualtions you have received my longest comment I think , and I kinda broke the rules by writing everything in the first part of my comment
"Remember, you're submitting a REVIEW for this CONTENT. This isn't a place for you to make smug jokes, post stupid nonsense, or act like a total jerk.
But I just thought you should know that if you present work or upload it don't start by stating the errors or that your sorry

raphiolas responds:

Thanks a lot i will keep everything in mind, though i can not instal any other programs like photoshop or indesign or any other adobe programs because it will crash so unfortunatly i will have to stick with Ai, but once again i thank you for your words and hope that you could indeed scout me when needed.

[VIKING]

Symmetry issues is the reason I work with photoshop , then you can just select and replace
But the downside is that you lose the character of the pencil

Nonetheless very nice drawing
proud to have scouted you :')

thewendigo responds:

haha thank you much

[Guess Who!]

Without realising an artist always puts a characteristic element of his own face into a drawing of a different person's face
Not sure where it is but i'd like to know
Very realistic , texture on the clothes, skin
I think i spot a little mistake on the lip but I'm not sure

Anyway very nicely done
How big was the paper or canvas you worked on ?

TheAmused responds:

9x12"

[Impending Silence]

Looks pretty good, love the rough lines
to me it expresses chaos

no-ma-designs responds:

Thanks for the review!